Writing about my holiday weather
One day it was a bright sunny day to go
outside
in the swimming pool with my cousin we had
ice cream and also we have healthy
sandwich after eating. Then we went
inside the pool it was a lot of fun we
went in a dark slide we all scream inside
the slide with my cousin and the was the
best day.
This writing is really good! I think you could be a author won day if you tried hard enough.
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